“Los que leen la poesía la necesitan como drogadictos.”
‘Those who read poetry need it like drug addicts.’
—Francisco Brines
At the intersection of two centuries, Luis Muñoz (1966) is one of contemporary Spain’s most salient poets. A number of critics have commented on Muñoz’s poetry, characterizing it as “minimalist” and “measured.” They note his style to be “pure,” “refined,” “atomized,” and “condensed.” In his “poetry of ellipsis and metonymy” this poet seeks to explore “intellectual enigmas.” His poems have been anthologized in a number of major turn-of-the-century collections. Most recently, Luis Antonio de Villena observes that it is in Correspondencias (2001) (Correspondences) and Querido silencio (2006) (Dear Silence) where Muñoz “has found his voice.” Significantly, Correspondencias received two prestigious awards in Spain in 2001. Nevertheless, no study has examined his poetry in any detail, and the present work addresses this matter.
Muñoz’s most recent poetry demonstrates conceptual and linguistic efficiency due, in part, to his mastery of syntactic omission. Ellipsis figures prominently in the 2006 collection. In one exemplary poem, “Dejar la poesía” (“Leave Poetry”), two syntactically silent characters engage in a conceptually efficient conversation concerning the nature of poetry. This work manifests the economy of expression reflected throughout the poetic discourse of Querido silencio. It also, as will be shown, serves as a response to the essential question framing this collection and this illustrative poem: Why is poetry an addiction?
In 2005 Muñoz published Limpiar pescado: Poesía reunida (Cleaning Fish: Collected Poetry). This work contains the majority of his decidedly innovative poems published up to that temporal crossroad. Gathered here are poems from Septiembre (September), Manzanas amarillas (Yellow Apples), El apetito (Appetite), and the aforementioned award-winning Correspondencias. Limpiar pescado establishes the singular relevance of his work and at the same time brings to light the introductory prologue “Transición” (“Transition”), where Muñoz reflects on his identity as a poet and his evolving views concerning his poetics. His essay reveals the conception, development, and nature of his poetry at the mid-point of the inaugural decade of the current century.
One year later, Querido silencio appeared. Here Muñoz continues to practice many of the guiding principles outlined the year before in his aptly named “Transition.” The collection, however, is especially noteworthy because it elucidates what Domingo Sánchez-Mesa considers a distinguishing feature of the newest poetry emerging in Spain today: “una renovada consciencia poética del lenguaje” (“a renewed poetic awareness of language”). With a well-defined economy of words, Muñoz presents in this collection an elegant analysis of innovative and vitally expressive poetic discourse. Sánchez-Mesa’s Cambio de siglo: Antología de poesía española 1990–2007 (Turn of the Century: Anthology of Spanish Poetry 1990–2007) foregrounds Querido silencio by presenting seventeen poems from it while including seven from Muñoz’s earlier works. This is significant because, also in this anthology, Muñoz himself elucidates the prominent features of the new expressivity characterizing his most recent work.
In particular, when responding to one of the questions posed in the questionnaire presented to each of the poets represented in this anthology, Muñoz makes clear:
La lengua es, naturalmente, un instrumento de comunicación, de conocimiento y es un código moral, en el sentido literal, de mor, mores, costumbre, que nos invita a intervenir en él, a jugar, a dialogar, a forcejear con él. La identidad de un poeta, que es inevitablemente lingüística, creo que está en el punto que confluyen los elementos personales, sus vivencias, sus ideas y su capacidad sensorial con la corriente de la tradición elegida por él, la que le ayuda a conocer y a conocerse.
Language is, naturally, an instrument of communication, knowledge and also a moral code, in the literal sense of mor, mores, customary habits, inviting us to intervene, play, dialogue and struggle with it. The identity of a poet, which unavoidably is linguistic, I believe resides in the confluence of personal elements, his experiences, ideas and sensorial capacity as they merge with his elected tradition, the one that helps him to know and to know himself.
Additionally, in another key anthology of this same era, Muñoz furnishes further commentary regarding his evolving poetics. In Rafael Morales Barba’s Última poesía española (1990–2005) (Latest Spanish Poetry (1990–2005)), Muñoz’s “Poética” (“Poetics”) reveals that for him poetry involves a “search,” an “adventure,” and a “conversation.” These recent illuminating descriptions readily characterize Querido silencio.
The 2006 collection demonstrates Muñoz’s profound investigation into linguistic identity, both of the poet and, above all, of the poem. “Dejar la poesía” serves as a fine example. This poem probes the nature of poetry. Intriguingly, although it appears to be a self-reflexive poetics, the poem does not establish how to practice the art of poetic composition, nor does it furnish a succinct explanation concerning the process of writing poetry. Instead, by presenting poetry as an addiction, Muñoz discloses its intrinsic identity. This poem also illustrates the economy of expression distinguishing Muñoz’s newest poetry. However, as will be shown, “Dejar la poesía” does even more than this: it concisely demonstrates why his poetry is unmistakably “inventive” while also providing evidence supporting the claim that Luis Muñoz is one of the most important young poets advancing the new lyric poetry written in Spain today.
Por restar mientras que tú sumas.
Por llenarte de pájaros la mesa.
Por llevarte a donde no sabes salir.
Por castigarte sin hablar.
Por decirte: estás solo.
Por preferir que cargues
con su dolor de siglos
cuando te sientes nuevo.
Por su imán descabellado.
Por la sed que produce
cuando finge ser agua.
Por su vida paralela.
Por hablarte
cuando quieres dormir.
Por su orgullo de bestia descarriada.
Porque mira a la muerte
con el rabo del ojo
cuando canta oh belleza.
Por no dar explicaciones.
Por suficiente.
Por insuficiente.
Por beberse la sombra de mañana.
By subtracting while you add.
By filling your table with birds.
By taking you where you know no escape.
By punishing you without speaking.
By telling you: you are alone.
By preferring that you accept the burden
of its centuries of pain
when you experience something new.
By its unbridled magnetism.
By creating thirst
when pretending to be water.
By its parallel life.
By speaking to you
when you want to sleep.
By its silly pride.
Because it stares death
in the face
when it sings oh beauty.
By not providing explanations.
By just enough.
By totally insufficient.
By drinking up the shadow of tomorrow.
In this poem Muñoz introduces “poetry” as a distinctive personality with a unique temperament and an extraordinary life of its own. As such, it knows exactly what it is and what it does. Possessing unparalleled self-knowledge, “poetry” exhibits a boundless potential, supremacy, and self-will. The poem thus features a self-assured leading “character,” first identified in the title. This personage displays an impressive linguistic identity, an inviting conversational style, diverse behavioral patterns and motives, and an uncanny capacity to understand not only its primary functions but also its own enchanting qualities.
The poem allows the traits of its central persona to unfold by establishing from the outset its unique association with another fellow “character,” an “impersonal you” (“tú”). The latter experiences poetry’s effects and, at times, appears to be troubled by these. Yet the “impersonal you” cannot resist the alluring central personality and its appealing self-expression. This dramatic staging is smart and original, but what is most exciting and inviting about this poem is the engaging exchange occurring between “poetry” and “you,” two syntactically silent characters masterfully presented by means of ellipsis. Here the poet utilizes and exploits expressivity by means of syntactic and rhetorical omission.
The refined and condensed nature of Muñoz’s “Dejar la poesía” is due in large part to the clarity of expression achieved by means of ellipsis. Its use readily illustrates the minimalist efficacy of this poet’s style as well as the conceptual concision of his poetry. Two complementary summaries concerning ellipsis ground and inform the present study: one concerns its application in Spanish syntax and the other its use in poetry.
Josep María Brucart explains: a striking and cross-linguistically prominent property of natural language is the presence of phonetically unrealized elements in a sentence, necessary for its correct interpretation—a general phenomenon that falls under the heading of ellipsis. The New Princeton Encyclopedia of Poetry and Poetics adds that in ellipsis the thought is complete; only a word or words ordinarily called for in the full construction but not strictly necessary are omitted (since obvious). This obviousness that makes the omission possible is facilitated by the use of parallelism of syntactic members in the construction, which helps achieve the effect of compression.
In “Dejar la poesía,” the poem’s central “character,” “poetry,” is introduced in the title. Curiously, this immediate, direct, introductory, and phonetically realized naming does not occur elsewhere in the poem. Rather, as the poem develops, the presence of “poetry” makes itself known by means of its unmistakable absence. Ellipsis directly figures into this poem at the outset: “Por restar mientras que tú sumas” (“By subtracting while you add”). The identity of the “empty subject” of the infinitive “restar” is derived from the closest preceding noun, in this case “la poesía,” found in the title. It is the presence of such a “phonetically unrealized” element that offers the first indication of the prevalent role syntactic omission will play in this poem.
From the outset Muñoz presents “poetry” by foregrounding its absence. The first five introductory lines function as the dramatic exposition revealing the fundamental role “poetry” will play in the overall staging of the dialogue taking place among the poem’s distinctive dramatis personae. This introduction also highlights the key role ellipsis plays in the presentation of “Dejar la poesía.” The obvious omission of “poetry” in this opening scene underscores its captivating syntactic and figurative presence.
This initial scene also foregrounds the immediacy of Muñoz’s discourse. The poet quickly closes any distance between text and reader by establishing the underlying processes of omission and recovery essential to this poem. In Spanish, ellipsis is recoverable from syntax and elision is recoverable from content. The poem’s opening lines immediately require the syntactic recovery of “poetry” in order to be understood. Syntactic omission thus establishes the important cognitive course of action the reader must assume in processing empty contents.
In Sánchez-Mesa’s view, the contemporary poet’s heightened awareness of language calls for a competent reader who assumes a prominent role in comprehending and participating in poetic communication. In this way, “Dejar la poesía” exemplifies another fundamental aspect of Spain’s recent poetry.
The process of omission, however, begins in the poem’s title. Here another significant yet silent personage is introduced as the elided quasi-impersonal subject of the infinitive “dejar.” Because this infinitive appears in absolute and initial position, it does not depend on a principal verb or verb phrase preceding it. What is most intriguing is that, because there is no plausible governing subject for this infinitive, it can be understood in Spanish to have an arbitrary subject corresponding in general to “whoever”—whoever is to leave poetry. This evident and immediate use of an elided empty infinitival subject is significant: as a silent character in this poem, its presence is signaled by its absence.
“Dejar la poesía” also features another important syntactically silent “character,” an ambiguous “impersonal you,” that converses with “poetry” and in so doing witnesses various modes of being exhibited by the latter. The syntactic presence of this “you” is obvious in the poem’s first line where it performs a specific action: “tú sumas” (“you add”). As the poem develops, this character experiences the effects of “poetry.” We learn that it is repeatedly drawn to this attractive personality but also considers abandoning it because of its addictive appeal.
The poem begins by establishing a contrast between its two main characters. “Poetry” performs one action while “you” perform another in opposition: “By subtracting while you add.” Later, in the closing lines, “poetry” is characterized as at once “sufficient” and yet “insufficient,” where both descriptions further enhance the opening dichotomy.
At times the “impersonal you” benefits, as the metaphor “by filling your table with birds” suggests. However, at other times “poetry” exerts its supremacy because it is fearless in facing existential enigmas—doubt, loneliness, anguish, death, or temporality.
The primacy of “poetry” is especially evident when the poem breaks its dominant parallel structure: “Porque mira a la muerte / con el rabo del ojo / cuando canta oh belleza” (“Because it stares death / in the face / when it sings oh beauty”). Here the poet disrupts the prevailing cadence of “por + infinitive” and showcases the poem’s leading character in one of its most captivating modes of being. By making resourceful use of the potential of imaginative self-expression, “poetry” does not hesitate to face perplexing existential matters with metaphoric intensity. Muñoz not only demonstrates condensed linguistic expression characteristic of his newest poetry but also distills from this conversation the essential nature of his subject.
The eloquence of the poem’s leading personage is contrasted with the silence of the “impersonal you” at a telling point: “By punishing you without speaking.” Here the syntax of ellipsis emphasizes the resulting silence experienced by “you” when reprimanded by “poetry.” “Poetry,” in this instance and in other key moments, maintains the advantage by articulating its intention (“By telling you: you are alone”), its addictive nature (“By speaking to you / when you want to sleep”), and its unwavering belief in its discourse (“By not providing explanations”).
Verbally confident, “poetry” communicates its charm, leads its own life, and proudly displays its accomplishments. These inherent qualities make possible its unique and creative self-expression. Consciously cognizant of the potential of verbal expressivity, “poetry” both reflects on past pain and relishes its imaginative discourse when fully consuming the present moment: “By drinking up the shadow of tomorrow.”
Understood in this way, “poetry,” personified, delivers a superb performance: “By creating thirst / when pretending to be water.” Attentive to its universal appeal, “poetry” tantalizes anyone—readers, the poet, whomever. The omission of an explicit indirect object, together with the figurative longing known by anyone captivated by poetry’s enchanting idiom, underscores that the “impersonal you” is not alone.
“Dejar la poesía” makes clear that due to the charming personality of its lead personage, “poetry” is capable of captivating anyone irresistibly drawn to it even when it does not provide explanations. Self-assured, self-reflective, and self-contained, “poetry” derives satisfaction from manifesting its metaphoric mastery and aesthetic appeal: “By drinking up the shadow of tomorrow.”
In “Dejar la poesía” Muñoz investigates poetic discourse by presenting an enlightening performance featuring two distinct dramatis personae engaged in a lively conversation. The poem reveals the addictive nature of one character, “poetry,” along with the persistent circumstances enveloping the other character, the “impersonal you,” caught in a struggle to abandon an irresistible habit. Conscious self-expression assumes a significant role as the poet spotlights the self-referential linguistic identity of both personalities.
What is most innovative in this poem is the way Muñoz enriches the discussion concerning the language of poetry by allowing condensed poetic expression to demonstrate its provocative and unbound potential. Special awareness of language is fundamental to this poem and the collection it represents. It is also critical to understanding the incisive linguistic identity of this poet and his extraordinary ability to exploit syntactic and poetic ellipses. In this way “Dejar la poesía” serves as an illustrative example of another distinguishing feature characterizing the newest poetry emerging in Spain today: a syntax that searches for new possibilities.
At the crucial intersection of the first and second decades of the new twenty-first century, Luis Muñoz and his work will continue to shape and distinguish contemporary Spanish poetry.